Review - You have captured the world through the eyes of children. Their energy, innocence and happiness. I suspect this is a child's view of Disneyland. Needs a little tightening in editing, outside of that, captivating. Love the cover, cute kids. Nice job. Robynn
I love it. the prologue part is definitely true. When we see them we can never stop ourselves from playing with them.
Angelica, never be afraid to share your writing with the good folks here at Bookrix. It's a delightful story you have posted. Keep writing, keep reading, master your craft:)
I actually like it, is a nice, cute story. The font would be just fine if a little bigger. Keep the good work!
I read it on my lunch break, it's so adorable. Keep it up!
Very cute little story. I love the word 'merriment'! It has a charming little ring to it.
