Hi bHon I am Alexis ok so I started to read ts book and I have a few questions
First off who's point of veiw is it from is it. Narrator or patty mark Marie and if from all before you start talking froma different point of veiw.
Second you need to make paragraphs I was lost in a sea of words I got lost at least six times befor the fourth page and some of your other readers might think so too.
Some little things are you spelling... Show more
Hi bHon I am Alexis ok so I started to read ts book and I have a few questions
First off who's point of veiw is it from is it. Narrator or patty mark Marie and if from all before you start talking froma different point of veiw.
Second you need to make paragraphs I was lost in a sea of words I got lost at least six times befor the fourth page and some of your other readers might think so too.
Some little things are you spelling and commas and stuff.
Sorry for the mean like comment I know I'm not the best speller or writer but I can read so I just wanted to poit those things out. Thanks. For reading my comment sorry it was kinda mean but I just thought you should here this.
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