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jldams

Hi Allegra.

I loved your short story. I have added it to my favourites. It had a wonderful pace and mood, I love to read this style of short story, snapshot first person liberated solitude. A couple of typos and some sentences wanting editing, but a very good piece. I'd love to read some poetry, if you have any to post- let me know.
:)
Jamie

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allegrasilberstein.7

Hi, thanks so much for your kind words...I'll check out those typos but not for a bit...I'm up to my ears with work...contests with Jan. deadlines for my poems, etc...all the best...Allegra

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joeparente

Your descriptions were excellent!
Your writing was very well done. The story was great and I love your purple hat!./joeparente

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allegrasilberstein.7

Thanks, Joe, for reading my story and for your kind comments...and I hope this reply reaches you. I have a hard time getting around on this web site and am never quite sure what I am doing. Allegra Silberstein

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