THIS is an excellent story! You have set scene marvelously and introduced/developed characters like a real professional. Your plot is filled with tension; rising and falling. So good. And your narrative voice is exceptional:) Just those tense issues...an easy fix!
Congratulations, Alice!
Dead World
By: Alice V
Mary is all that Myra has left of her past life before the virus took over. Her little sister Mary means more to her than anything in the Dead World but when Mary goes missing, Myra will risk her own life to find her younger sister...even risk being out at night when the dead walk the earth.
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