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I love the story, it most deff draws the reader in just a few things that might help you make it better, Watch your grammar and if you notice you are using a word over and over again look ina a theasarus for another word that means the same. ALSO go into a little more detail make the reader feel like there inside the book. Love it keep me posted please write more
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