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Please write a full book for this! This was great and very engaging, please email me when its done because I really want to read more! emert009@medway.org.uk

I hope the whole book is like this!

..but this type of thing goes on all around us. This is a very real exposé, well composed, emotional, and a deserving winner. The bar has been set pretty high.

This is incredible. You had me hanging on every word. Definitely can see why this won.

Wow, so emotional, the tension builds and builds. I felt like I was there. Well done! Congrats on the win.

Writing is supposed to evoke emotion in the reader and this story did just that. I can see why this garnered first place. Great work!

I am not surprised that this story took top spot. Everything about it was first rate. So well done, so creative, Alada. Congrats!

Masterfully written...Congrats...well deserved.

Congratulations on winning the contest. Your story used good description and was gripping to read. Well done :)

I am stunned. This was done very well, though I wish I'd never read the story. It's such a gripping tale, so close to reality, I cannot forget it. The children... their horror sinks into my very soul, it haunts me...

Your storytelling skills are outstanding. And in less than 1,000 words, written in 24 hours? I'm impressed.

Well done. Well done.

---RbG

A really deserving win for this contest. A lot of raw emotions spill out on the pages and the word choices seem perfect. Really impressive!