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felixthecat

I was delighted to see your entry...wondered what it would contain!
I was impressed with the emotion contained and so finely put into verse.
It struck me that even your anti-love poem ended upbeat! Delighted, too, how you used the repetition of stanzas so effectively.
Wonderful...you have my vote.

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lazarus67

Oh My! I'm jealous of Bill.
Good for you Melissa.
Your friend
Laz

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david.wood

Very lovely work Melissa, I gave a star and a vote for you my friend. If you have the time please check out my book for the contest; Inner Thoughts of You

David

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Kalai

Your words beautifully tell what is love and what is not love.

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selivia

A valient effort, Melissa. Some lovely sentiments expressed, even the "anti-love" showed the power of the conflict.