You explained everything with just few words... that's amazing!! It was full of mystery and heck I like ghost stories. Not everyone can do a good ghost story but this was great! It took a turn I did not expect. Really cool!
There is nothing quite like a good ghost story! Great job!
I was drawn into the story. You kept me there until the end. I enjoyed this spooky tale. Well done.
Again, your prose is succinct and filled with tension. Again, I enjoyed reading so much!
Extremely well-written! The prose flowed smoothly and was well balanced. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.
What was i thinnking, Your book is amazing! Such talent :D
Charliie x
um.....Hi there!
Ok, well i got your message and i was going to read your book! But...is it scary?
Charliie x
Hi. melissa, Just read Whispers on the Line. Story aught me from the beginning and led me to the mysterious conclusion. Very well written. Charlie
Melissa I loved your story. I wrote a longer comment but i think I lost it before transmission but in a nutshell. I loved the title and cover art and the idea intriaued me. Caroline was a vivid character and I would love to see an entire novel brought to life with your words. I like your style and I can read it easily and it captured my interest on page one. I look foreward to more of your works.
Jeffrey Allen White,
Abel in Paris
