wow u have my vote, i dont normally read books like this but if there all as good as this then i think i might ;)

Far better now!

Hi Melissa,
You did an awesome job on drawing out the conflict in the final confrontation with the attacker. Where you planning on taking this story to other sources? Trying to get it into mainstream media? I hope you do. Thank you for working so hard on it.

Wow, your good. Here's my vote. !)

Nicely well written! You got my vote! 4 thumps up!:)

Awesome. Liked the new ending better. I would vote again, but i cant.:( Still love it!

I like the new ending a lot better. It seems more rounded out. Good luck in the contest.

hi im fabi im 13 yaers old. u hav talent. ure book made me relize that we ahav to be cautios. i admire u for ure writting.

Great book I'm glad you messaged me.

Melissa, you're new and improved end is the icing on your already great story. Not only is it thrilling but is also informative. A need for all women to be aware of. There are predators out there, and they are very dangerous.
Thanks a lot.....Laz