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along with a story line - I'm not crazy about reading re rapists but this was a good story even with a little love thrown in...P
along with a story line - I'm not crazy about reading re rapists but this was a good story even with a little love thrown in...P
i knew it! i knew it was him! i started to doubt myself when Denis had her alone in the school and started to compliment her (by the way 'yea, creapy just like you"? that made me laugh. but this was really good. very imformative and very interesting with a bit of humor. you have my vote! i loved this. :D
Got your message again today. I had read your story and voted but I went back to review to see if you had edited. Again, I like your work. Not my type of topic, but you handle it well. I would only humbly suggest you change the plot a little on page 60-61. It felt like a let down to the tension you were building when she was called and told not to worry, the rapist had been caught. You have a perfect chance there to let your... Show more
Great work and keep up the goood work.
This was a very interesting story. It was very well written and, it did send an educational message too. Job well done!
Thanks for voting for me by the way. I like you writing style. It is simply complex. That makes sense to me. Anyway, to be honest I didn't finish it because I don't really like sexual assault stories. But, beside the point you had good grammar and spelling and not to mention an interesting plot line. I also like the uniqueness of how the assaulter... attacks. I do like the story, but I;m honestly to young to put myself... Show more
i love your work and will love to have it in my box
I suspected it was him,from the first.gud story.you got my vote
