I really liked this story. I too liked the point of view. GREAT TWIST!!!

Belinda

Aww so cute!!! I loved the kid POV. It was very well written.

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Your writing was great, and it was a fun story. I wish I had some special incites that I could give, but I don't. What I do have a great big grin on my face after reading your tale. Thank you for that, and keep it up!

Ha ha ha! Well done, Vanessa. Your narrator's voice was truly authentic...but I WANTED TO SEE HIM...well, I won't give the ending away. Loved the ending line:)

Great story. I loved the play on words.

A light and airy tale. Easy to read and brings a smile. Especially the twist - LOL

Great job Vanessa. Perfect play on words and exactly how I envisaged the twist ending.....the line of the song to mean something entirely different, yet fit the story.

When we had our home school going we had 'dance' lesson in the form of ballet and most of the boys were 'game' for it especially after finding that a lot of the pros use the same exercises that ballet workouts incorporate.

I liked it , that was cute.Serena

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