hurry and update im in the edge of insanity

Just a quick note - two halves make one whole. Your character can't have five halves (vampire, werewolf, angel, wizard and dragon). That would make her two and a half people. Please don't be offended that I'm pointing this out, but if you want people to take your writing seriously, you have to avoid mistakes like that.

Otherwise, though, this could be interesting for those who love the supernatural genre (and lots of people do!), so edit your work - if you haven't already done so, put this in a Word document and use the spell/grammar check feature to take care of the obvious errors, then have a good friend read through it for other minor things.

A polished work will get lots more reads, believe me, and I'd love to see you find a solid audience for your stories! 'D

ooooohhhhhh he feels salty!!!! this is good.

it's really good plz write more

oh snap, fight fight fight!!!...this is soooo good!!!

this book is good...you should make Lucas and Adrian fight over Raven.

Alrighty everyone imma get straight to the point.... I have not decided to make my up coming scene a hot steamy one or a mild scene. I'm kinda leaning to the mild but It's all up to u guys so hit me up to give my you choice. See ya!

I love how you bring your characters to life with their exciting personalities! I had fun reading this book. Check out my writing if your interested. I hope you update it soon! And btw...you don'thave to explain why you write certain things in your book. Your the author and green crest high is a good name if you think it is.you don't have to explain yourself. :)

lmao so funny

Love it please write more. Luv Yall. <3