Well written, I enjoyed it. My father and grandfather are from Chicago, and it helped me feel like I was there with them. Keep up the writing!

I absolutely love this! You've really got a gift.

I hope to make it into a long, long series. I grew up in the South side of Chicago on 63rd Street from the ages of 2 in 1954 until I joined the Marine Corps at the age of 17 in 1969. It was a rough town back then.

I've decided to fall back on what I know. I've also been a Cop, don't hold it against me, LOL! Now I just want to write.

Roger

great stuff! i love detective books.