There is nothing wrong with saying that the grammar needs to be better. People don't make great things by being mediocre or by denying that their work needs help.

Fearless Pinoy, I was going to read it and I'm sure it would have been good, but I stopped as well because of the grammar. It makes it harder to really get into the book if you have to keep stopping to try to understand the sentence. Good Luck in the future.

I agree with Michelle and Ckarns90. I tried to read the book but its very difficult to read because of the grammar. (Just a suggestion) Maybe when you finish the book you can have someone read it and correct it. I think its incredibly rude about how others reacted on the comment and highly immature. But anyways I am a horrid speller and have my friends correct my writing. I also am very poor at commas so I also get there help. I am currently trying to read the book again though. It seems like a wonderful book so far and I love the story line.