It was ok, need more kissing, it should have been longer and yeah I agree Bella's point of view and y did Edward say "As I love you I hope?" doesn't make sense for the story you know they love each other.

Good description though. More about Edward (need some).

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it was good but you need to write some more about edward and bella and put it in bella's point of view

hi ummmm y did edward say "As I love u i hope?
~Obsessed Reader

nice ending

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Omg that was such a good little book nice use of words to twilightlol!