brilliant :)
it's a real pleasure to read your poems/stories. Keep it up!!!
txtfreak1
brilliant :)
it's a real pleasure to read your poems/stories. Keep it up!!!
txtfreak1
Keep it up! It's about time people like you sharing some inspiration and right thoughts for others to think about.
A Wedding in Time:
"I heard my heart beats faster." ---> I think you meant "I heard my heart beating faster."
Your poems are good. I personally like ryhme over free verse, but your poetry is emotional and very descriptive. I personally like A Wedding In Time because I could see you walking down the aisle and everything else.