OMG!!!! who's in the car!!!!??!?!?!?

plz update fast i am waiting so much plz
i just love this book :)

Her parents have a job she doesnt know about that includes traveling a lot, that is why they dont see her but 3 to 4 times a year, her grandmother used to live with her while her parents were not home, but she died about two summers ago. They trust her, well her father does the mother worries to much, but later in the book everyone will know there job and everythhing else will unravel itself. When she learns about there job she will loose some trust in them, but if you keep reading it will all be worth it in the end. Im gonna definately keep writing it only proves to make things better, but thank you for the comment cricketslistentoo.

So why do her parents trust her enough to let her live alone, and only care to see her three to four times a year? That part is a little unrealistic. And the sentence structure is a little choppy and random, you should work on giving it more flow. But keep writing, you'll get better if you keep writing.

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please update xx

write more

Please For The Love Of God Keep Updating! It Is Fantastic! ;-)~

Please write more soon!!

Please Update thios book it is def my fav book. Ugh! I am about to throw a fit!!!!!!

I think it is time for me to update :P I will try to do tht today during class, if were taking notes (: