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I knew someone who was sexually abused. She was messed up. Nice story.
I knew someone who was sexually abused. She was messed up. Nice story.
You are an excellent writer. The story was compelling and kept me interested to the end. You got a vote and a star from me. God Bless
I feel that your story is very well written, and absolutely compelling. I did not see the ending coming, and i'm glad for that. You did fantastic. Good Luck with the contest. I most definitely voted for yours.
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The only complaint I have is the ending was rather abrupt. I had a hard time transitioning from Adam being a wonderful memory to the monster. It really touched me, though. Maybe it helps that my boyfriends name is Adam, but her tender memories of him - I know those feelings, I have felt them. The connection was wonderful.
I'm always impressed by the talent of people so young. I'd love to say I wrote this well at 15, but I'd... Show more
How is paranormal literature doing in the publishing market now days?
Interesting subject, but not enough to hold my interest. This is because I write paranormal literature. You will need to remember to indent your paragraphs and have them in font size 12 Roman Text. Publishers do take this in consideration to a decision in publishing your work. other than that great subject.
Blessings
It was done entirely on bookrix, on the standard template they gave me. That means normal formatting like indenting didn't exist and font size/type needed different codes that I have no idea how to work.
This was a fantastic read. Compelling from start to finish, and it's refreshing to read one with proper grammar and prose, enough to keep me interested in the story as a whole. you are a fantastic writer. Keep em coming.
I was talking to a friend of mine that has had repressed memories, and the pattern his memories went through were what I based Lilly's off of. I'd go into it, but I'm pretty sure he doesn't want it shared.
Thanks for your kind words, and yeah, I agree about the ending. I wasn't... Show more
I was talking to a friend of mine that has had repressed memories, and the pattern his memories went through were what I based Lilly's off of. I'd go into it, but I'm pretty sure he doesn't want it shared.
Thanks for your kind words, and yeah, I agree about the ending. I wasn't sure what to do, and part of me always wanted to write something where people ask, "What the?" at the end of it, so I took the opportunity.
Well it most certainly did cause a "what the..?", but I approve of such style so I didn't mind at all. And I'd like to point out that having a hard time transitioning in that respect was part of the ingenuity of it because it made you feel how Lily felt when she discovered he... Show more
Well it most certainly did cause a "what the..?", but I approve of such style so I didn't mind at all. And I'd like to point out that having a hard time transitioning in that respect was part of the ingenuity of it because it made you feel how Lily felt when she discovered he wasn't what she thought he was.
http://www.bookrix.com/_ebook-bookdoesnotexist-p
Networking, Lex. xD