i enjoyed your story and i think it had a good flow however i think it was very safe in context, it would have perhaps been more absorbing to create a future that wasn't so typical but it was very well written which kept me reading.
but hey thats my opinion =]
I always liked stories of time travel. I've read it.
Cool! :-)
can some one tell me how to put theses books on a nook reader thanks gwen
If you are looking for convoluted tales of time travel with temporal dilemmas and paradoxes, you will not find it here. This story is a straightforward account of someone who has a chance to see a future that is unacceptable, so returns back to prevent it from happening. A simple clean story with no mind bending plot twists. Sometimes the space cowboy wins.
What a great story!! I loved the different view of 'life in the future'.x
I really enjoyed this book and wished that it was a bit longer. The author did some up front research about time travel, which is important so as to get the reader up to speed on time travel, no pun intended. He then used his imagination on what followed in the book, nice work!
Thanks for the great compliment about my story "Time Traveler" usmc6768. As far as research - I really didn't do much. It more or less came from watching shows on the science channel and the discovery channel; not with the intention of writing about anything I've seen, of... Show more
I found this very like many other already published stories of timne travelling, not to say this isn't bad, because it is not a bad short story. Please edit properly as there were several spelling mistakes and one English mistake. (ergo. lit brightly should be brightly lit) in the beginning and one ior two little words left out like a place where there should have been a 'the'. I still enjoyed it nonetheless. I think you... Show more
Thanks for telling me about the mistakes. I wrote this short story in a hurry for a contest and didn't notice them. I suck at grammer! LOL
You might find more errors in my other stories too and I'd appreciate it if you'd tell me about them as well - if you read any ;-) .
I enjoyed this story very much
Thanks Denise. Glad you liked my story. If you're into scifi and Star Wars you may want to read my other stories posted on Bookrix. Just add me as a friend and go to my profile page to check them out.
May the Force be with you... =;-)
Believable.
Well written.
I liked it.
Thankds raml69. Appreciate your comment. Hope you'll check out my other stories. xD
That's what people say about today's science fiction - it's tomorrow's reality, but tomorrow seems to be approaching way to fast. Problem is, humanity doesn't often realize it's too late to change things until it is.