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bookaddict99

Im very into science fiction and i found this short story very intriguing and well written I loved it

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susanbowes (aka: Forcechild)

I'm not sure which story you're talking about, but thank you very much for the compliment. If you like Star Wars you might like "Malignant Metamorphosis." One reader said it could've been written by Lucas himself. Outstanding reveiw! xD

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totallytennantmad

What a brilliant book. I loved the way you saw the future - genius,xxx

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susanbowes (aka: Forcechild)

Well thank you very much. I appreciate the comment. If you like that short story and are into Star Wars you should read "Malignant Metamorphosis." Most who've read it say it's very good. One reader said Lucas could've written it himself. Now that was quite a compliment. I hope... Show more

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jpdiry

Well written, I enjoyed it

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susanbowes (aka: Forcechild)

Thanks robottina. Glad you liked my story.

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robottina

Hello Sus4nb0wes,

I have just intercepted your transmission about the "Time Traveler". Your programming script is startlingly accurate, except that the future you describe does not take place in 3057, but rather in 2557, 500 years earlier. It should be noted that one cannot trust androids, and they likely provided faulty information about the maker of the Administrator. It's likely that the wrong human was killed.
I would like... Show more

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susanbowes (aka: Forcechild)

Thanks for the vote joeparente. Helps to build my confidence.

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susanbowes (aka: Forcechild)

Thanks for the star and the fav. This story was longer, but I had to cut the length because you're only allowed a total of 30 pages. Glad you liked it though.

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skulker

Great Book wish it was longer though.

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joeparente

Well written! too bad it's so short
I voted it!

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flaeman

very good read keep up the good work

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susanbowes (aka: Forcechild)

Thanks flaeman. Glad you enjoyed this story. :-)

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