neatly packaged!

A great read. I thoroughly enjoyed the story. I hope you can write more like this!

A great read. I thoroughly enjoyed the story. I hope you can write more like this!

I am completely in aw of this book. I have to be honets with you I was dreading reading a sci-fi book. I love this book from beginning to end. I was so engaged with the character. thumbs up

I'm not usually a big sci-fi fan, but I really enjoyed this visual tale of time travel, and what we might find in the far-off/out future.

Best of luck.
You got a vote.

Thanks for voting for my story monalisa6. Proabaly won't win, but getting practice writing short stories anyway. LOL

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Thanks for telling me about the mistakes. Originally, I did include Einstein's theory - including the bit about gravity, but had to shorten the full story in order to submit it because of the 25 page limit. I did correct this error. I hope what I included will satisfy you.

When you're writing science fiction, do your best to get the science, if any, right, or at least plausible. Einstein's Theory of General Relativity which deals with the four-dimensional geometry of space, has nothing to do with time travel and everything to do with gravity. Also, the narrative is quite careless. As an example, on page 16 you write "do haste" when you mean "due haste". I suggest a general edit before you submit.

I love science fiction, and this one is a page turner! Very well written, Susan!