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beardie

This sounds like it would be an awsome book. But I really dont like this kind of book.
Beardie

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susanbowes (aka: Forcechild)

Which book are you talking about :-?

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norabookworm23456

It`s a good book please write more

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susanbowes (aka: Forcechild)

Not sure which story you're talking about, but I assume it's Black Rain. I will get back to it as soon as possible. ---- and thanks for saying you like it. :-)

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chinaren

Done!

I'm happy to say the plot became more twisty and complex as it went on. I still think some things could have been done in greater depth, but in the end it's a love story, so I understand the lack of politicking.

Anyway, a good read!

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susanbowes (aka: Forcechild)

You're a fast reader! ;-)

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chinaren

I'm only one third through so far...

The writing style is fairly straightforward, if you'll excuse the phrase, and the plot thus far hasn't been really surprising, but it's holding my interest.

One point. Sometimes you use 'thy' and other olde English, and other times you don't. It's probably best to either use one or the other, rather than a mix. I had this very same issue with one of my (rare) short stories, so I changed it... Show more

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susanbowes (aka: Forcechild)

I apprecitate all comments. Makes me a better writer, but that's not the book I was telling you about. The one that's got all the sex is called "Seduction." Check that one out next. :-)

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tanisha

I loved this book. It is my personal favorite.

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susanbowes (aka: Forcechild)

Thanks tanisha. Glad you enjoyed it. Hope you'll read some of my other stories too. If you like Star Wars you might like "Malignant Metamophosis." It's posted as 3 books due to its length, but I've had some problems reposting part 1 due to some foul up. Just click on "view more"... Show more

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skulker

Real Good Book Susan.

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susanbowes (aka: Forcechild)

I assume you finished reading it already. You are a real fast speed reader. Glad you liked it. xD

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susanbowes (aka: Forcechild)

Thanks for the star and the save to fav skulker. Glad you like this story.

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susanbowes (aka: Forcechild)

I want to thank everyone who has given me a star and/or saved this book to their favorites. I'm glad that you consider this story a good one.

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susanbowes (aka: Forcechild)

Thanks for star and glad you added it to you favs.

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cavlaster

Going to keep it safe in my fav's vault. ;-)