I think it was very convincing, so realistic, it was as if Mary told the story herself. I really liked this and you did a great job! I think that it would be great if you made a novel out of this short story. Keep up the good work:)

Ex reading -Ex book cover do you have more books

can you send a copy to my email of this book? i liked it and want to recomend it to my friends thanks

I absolutely enjoyed reading it today!

very intresting

thank you all. :) it's so encouraging to read your comments.

Very good story, coming from Mary's point of view. I often wonder what she thought, holding the King of us all in her arms. Probably something very close to this. Great story. Thanks for putting it up. I gave you a vote.

I really enjoyed this short story, shortly, gently, beautifully. :)

Beautiful little story Stevie. Feelings of love, recognized by so many of us, and then the unexpected realisation of who this child is. Very nice.

Thank you for participating in our short
story writing contest "Family Stories".

The Librarian