That was just absolutely beautiful. So well written and moving. I loved it.

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That was just absolutely beautiful. So well written and moving. I loved it.

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That was just absolutely beautiful. So well written and moving. I loved it.

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My computer went a little crazy there for a second. Didn't mean to coment four of the same thing.

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that was such a good story. it gives a good message.

wow.. just wow... I loved this story. It is so well put together and it even made me cry! you are a very talented writer! keep up the good work! :D

Thank you all so much for your comments. It's wonderful to know my little story has touched your heart.

Absolutely beautiful!

So beautifully told. Most people do not realize that because a person cannot communicate in a 'normal fashion', the person inhabiting the broken body has a brain and emotions bursting to come forth...I'm sorry I can only vote once for this story....p

This was the best little story I think I've read in a really long time. Although it was as small or rather short it was long enough for me to feel as if I was there with her. I knew she couldn't actually talk but u made it feel as if she actually was communicating. Then once she got her device that actually helped her to talk she was finally free. Free as the birds and butterflies in the blue skies above.

Great work and u got my vote. Very good visuals for a girl that wasn't even able to communicate like u or I.

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