I thought you did a great job on this story, and the ending was a surprise.and no I am not just saying this cause you're my wife.

Nice! I enjoyed it. The cover is really good too, simple but adds to the mystery of "Nina". You are really great with descriptions. All in all it was an amazing little story... freaky but awesome.

Blessings,
Meli

This was great! I liked the ending, I wish I could tell you why but you may have more readers so I'll keep it to myself :)

The fear of a pregnancy not quite what you expect, realized. Good writing. Serena

Very cool, Stacey. I won't give away the great ending lines, but yeah, what else could she do? I empathized with both:)
Nice. Nice.