Thank you for the kind words. It's refreshing to know how others perceive my work.

The Carrens where coming to dinner and now their would....

THE CARRENS WERE COMING TO DINNER AND NOW THERE WOULD...

you did a good job...the last story really got me smiling...Paula

you did a good job...the last story really got me smiling...Paula

you did a good job...the last story really got me smiling...Paula

Thank you for the help. I did change those mistakes and look forward to all constructive criticism on ways to improve this new writers story writing.

OK, you asked for feedback, and here it is. First, congratulations for getting an entry together and writing it. I am glad you did. However, when you are submitting such short stories, you must make sure your spelling and punctuation is perfect. Here are a few errors I found that you should fix right away...and then it will look much more polished.

Story 1: "height" is mis-spelled (hieght)
Where is she? not Where is she!

Story 2: Carrens were not Carrens where

their should be there

Story 3: i've should be I've

That's it. Easy stuff to fix. All the very best of luck. Valerie