Nicely done. It will be interesting to see where you go from here, and I'm still liking it. Fast paced and fun to read. The pages really fly by.
yess thank you! I am glad you like it, and I'll look thru for the typos. I wrote alot more in a notebook already, re-fixing things as i go along. (just minor details tho) im not even close to finish typing it, and haven't been done writing it. hope ing to have a 2nd book when I'm done with this. Your comment made me verry happy, and gonna start to get more up, just for you =D hope you like it
-Shyann
Read it because you said not to. Ha.
And since on your icon you said I was the reason for the 'middle finger' again I say.
Ha. Ha.
That being said - I LOVED IT.
Sweet bump in. Quick and not overdone, then right into an enjoyable round of action. Great back and forth on the dialogue and the banter. Well directed action. And I like that your character seems original. Not the same old same old. She did things I did not expect, but... Show more
thank you , its my first book. i already wrote ALOT of it down on a notebook, i just haven't finished typing it yet. XD theres alot to write. i never knew there was this website. my sister told me about it and said i should put it down, shes making a western book, shes my friend if you wanna go check it out, i think its destiny675. thanks for commenting =D
