thank you for your comment. i'll make sure that i make it easier to read.

i really like what you have so far it is really good one thing that i think would be good for you to do is make sure that you make sure that you keep saying me or the name to make it more clear but it is really good i would read this book for sure.

thank you. i'll be writing more and i don't mind tips from anyone who wants to give them. it'll help me write better.

its pretty good please write more