ghetto should have been the name of your book soo sorry that, but in life there are critics try not to sound so hood in your next piece

there should be more to this book all it does is say the dates. U should write some details and tell us how they are doing

this story was every good. you should make a 2nd book life without you. say how happy you are with your man now

i really like this is good better than best

the speling was horrible but it had a good plot to it and it would have been better if there were more details

the speling was horrible but it had a good plot to it and it would have been better if there were more details

I love your cover

This story was great but i could use more details it seemed chuncky kinda trying smoothing it out and taking everything slower more details. You have a great imangination to.

This story was great but i could use more details it seemed chuncky kinda trying smoothing it out and taking everything slower more details. You have a great imangination to.

i liked the end and dont be mean she wrote the book the way she wanted it would of been better longer!