It is always a pleasure to read your short stories, Sereni. Never a dark ending; always upbeat in your unique, lovely "voice". Good job again!-voted!

This is a very good story. It earns my vote. Good luck!

such a bother! Loved the story and the ending was 'way cool' - loved it!...p;]

Like it a lot.

Good luck.
Love Wendy
xxx

I like your twist on a classic. With a few quick edits and proofing, this is a great story. You have my vote