The girl was in her early teens, thank you for your vote. Glad you enjoyed it.Serena
this was a great read, it was both sad and beautiful, and fantastically real despite the fantasy basis. I particularly liked the part about how the girl clung to the body of her baby, it was a very probable psychological reaction to her situation.
Well written thought provoking read. I am especially impressed with how you portray of the child's attitude towards the husband
As a past foster I have looked after some badly abused children. Although many believe a child would shy away from males this is often not the case. They crave a males approval and will do all they can to achieve this. The story line is great what an imagination you have
well done you get my vote good luck
peggles