You have a talent for words. I f you have done this well at 16 yrs.old, I can,t imagine what will happen later on. what you have written is on the cusp of 'holy cow' that was great!!./joeparente author of "WHITE DOWN" (comments and votes appreciated)

nice combination between a simile and a visual metaphor
''Silence as license
let our hearts fly in sky''
well written abstract poems,lovely to read..
you got my vote...

Your book is very different. so not everyone will understand your intention. You seem to be a rebel. what you have written is very interesting. Keep writing. The more you write, the more you perfect your craft.

I for one enjoy poetry that plays with words and sounds and makes the reader search for deeper hidden meaning. I'm not sure if you meant to underline all your poems, but I find it to make it more difficult to read.

i seriously and sincerely consider your comment...
i appreciate yur faithful review on my book
thanQ

Hi Rohith,
The concepts or ideals you have presented are some-what hard to grasp. They make the reader work a little to hard.
I find the use of simple words allow the author to reach more of the people...which is not to say the right word is always easily understood.
I truthfully found it hard to finish this work of art. Please be aware, this is only one persons comments.

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