You brought home the feelings of "stage fright" very well.

Good story!

That gave me goosebumps. I LOVED the way you ended it. Awesome description throughout- way to go! :)

It's amazing! I take it you're kind of on Britain's Got Talent or something. I felt as if I was there, in the wings with you.

Thanks for the invite. I enjoyed this story for fright. Your writing is spot on, and what could be more frighting than what you have written. Nicely down, I'm heading over to vote now.

This is everyones nightmare I think, and you have put it out there for everyone to read! I will vote for this one!

i thought your story was really good and well written

writing's gettin' sharper all the time, K.D.!

I think you did a good job with this one, there were descriptive's in there that I liked very much, and I will say that among the many writers here on bookrix I have found one of the few that is actually readable and enjoyable. :)
Thank you for the little bit here, I enjoyed it and have added it to my favorites. ;)

Simply written in an eloquent way that accurately portrays fear. There's a reason you're a YW of the week powerhouse you know.

The fear to perform is a scary one. Very nicely portrayed.
You are a talented writer!