Oh my goodness. I love the story from beginning to end. Great job, awesome imagination. I look forward to reading more of your books. :)

This is such a wonderful story. I loved it!

Rob....wonderful protector.

Rob, this is an excellent story. You held me captive from the first page to the last. I have several stories in the Flash Fiction contest, but I'm still going to wish you the very best -- your talent is so obvious.
Warmest regards and respect,
CJ

You are turning into my favorite writer. I absolutely loved this story in every way and I shall definitely give you my vote next month. Am looking forward to reading the rest of your stories.....right now!

I almost teared up... if this wasn't flash fiction, you may have had me. :o) Beautiful job. I read it and didn't see anything to correct, I was just enjoying the story. I like that kind of book.