I don't usually bother reading stories about werewolves or vampires. I find them 'cultish' and all similar.
But...
In this case I got interested before I realized I wasn't reading a mystery. I'm glad you deceived me, Glynis. I enjoyed it, in spite of myself. LOL
This is really good so far :D
I'm glad you put a link on the Young Writer's page, because now I'm addicted!
Thanks for that, I'm so glad you like it.
I haven't read it all the way through, but I do intend to do so. It is a very very interesting story that makes me keep wanting to read on. You made the character Sara very likeable and the 'wrong place, wrong time' thing was very intriguing. You do have a couple mistake where you added a comma when it wasn't needed, but other than that it was quite good.
Thank you for noticing that, I have a problem with commas, I love them too much!!! LOL!
I have the same problem! My friends always point it out to me!
I think this tale is more your natural genre. My take on it is exquisite and masterfully executed. I certainly enjoyed your 'Believe'.
Thank you so much Dave for reading this book. I'm overwhelmed you like this, I debated putting it up for sale. You have just made up my mind. So thank you.
Was expecting a different twist to the ending, you really took me by surprise. nicely done with this story.
Thank you Tanya for reading this, I'm glad it surprised you!
Thank you, for making me believe, Glynis. This story was definitely gripping & a page turner.
Thank you so much my friend, I'm still working to make it a better story.
Awesome book. I can't believe it! I was on the edge of my seat! You need to always write. I loved it! Awesome story.
Thank you Marriah, you just made my day
Hey, thanks a lot Judy. And I'm going back to fix those typos and tense errors.;)
That was the most unusual story of that genre (I won't say which to keep from spoiling it for other readers) I've ever read. Holy cow! Major chills! The ending was brilliant!
One or two minor issues - you changed tense several times, but that's very easy to fix; a couple of typos. Other than that, though, very nice and well-written. It had a good flow, and kept me literally on the edge of my seat from beginning to end.
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I so glad I got you, Dave. LOL!
It needs work, but for someone like you, who is a very good mystery writer to have enjoyed it, I'm so pleased.
I plan to enter this in the YA contest, when it's ready. Thank so much again for reading and adding your lovely comment.