Isn't it suppose to be the Half Blood Prince? Oh, this isn't Harry Potter. I hate that series for some reason. Maybe its witchcraft and I hate witchcraft. Other than that I love it a lot! WRITE MORE!!!!

new update, tell this to all your friends

WOW!!! Thats all I can really say. I love this, please update soon.

add more ! please!

started really good then about page 45-47 loops over and over. need to fix that. other than that it's pretty good

Knowing that my readers enjoy my book, gives me strenght and motivation to continue doing what I love the most, writing from the heart!
Your positive comments and constructive criticisms are always welcomed!

The beginning is a bit rushed and you could still work on it later. You could put to better use the first person perspective and explore the main characters personality and opinions of the surrounding world.
At first I didn't knew what to think about the plot but it's starting to develop quite nicely: love triangle, power strugle, personal happiness vs duty, sacrifice for the sake of others. Really beautiful underlying motives. I can't wait to see how the story develops.
Very good idea to use multiple perspectives. It gives a better understanding of the characters.
The scene with Amen seems a bit rushed. Even if it's love at first sight it should still have some development stages. The scene with Cornelius on the other hand was brilliant.
There are some spelling mistakes and tenses coordination problems but that can be solved later.
The descriptions are sometimes lacking and sometimes to detailed. With practice you'll figure out on your own where you need more details and where you don't.
You seem aware of the fact that literature is not just a historical chronic of events, but a medium of presenting ideas, concepts, a way of sending a message. That's a basic.
All you need know is a lot of practice. Write a lot. Practice makes perfect.
Hope the muses bless you with inspiration.

P.S. In case you didn't figure it out yet: Yes, I like it.

man this book left me wondering i love it

WOW!!! Write more and fast!!! Please?! I really wanna know wat happens!

Wow, I loved it. It was entertaining at the last part. Are you gonna write more? if so, mesage me cuz I really want to know what happens next. Great job.