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joeparente

Small printing but big story. I enjoyed this one a lot . your constant referral to purple ever changing glasses made the story. you deserve a big vote for this./joeparente

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petra michelle

despite the font size, was thoroughly engaging, Rebekah! I loved the use of glasses as a metaphor to describe each character's internal pov's.

It has my vote! Good luck, Rebekah! Petra :))

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rebekahjennings

Apologies on the font. I have figured out now how to do font on BookRix and my second story is much better on the eyes. "Shame" is my other story, I actually wrote it before "Chameleon" but have only lodged it now. Check it out as I'd appreciate your comments. In "Shame" I've tried playing around with perspective. I've tried to not make it confusing so good luck.

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silver.rose

Wow a very engrossing story. I thoroughly enjoyed it and completely followed it all the way through. A well thought out tale. It definitely gives a new meaning on looking out side the box.. love the idea with the glasses as it is very original and it definitely gives new perspective to a characters personality. I very much enjoyed how well the colours were chosen for each set of glasses aswell... a well thought out creative... Show more

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mirandabm

Really good story. I like the glasses analogy. Well written and disturbing. My only complaint is that the font is a bit small and I had to go off in search of MY glasses (golden tinted)

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DreamSculptr

Very interesting using the metaphorical analogy of glasses throughout the story to give it continuity and cohesiveness. You've described a state of being that is different to everyone involved depending on their perspective and it may be possible that many people view others as having smudged glasses. You referred to rose colored glasses. Once had a pair of sunglasses tinted wine - as the sensible patina darkened over time... Show more

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kassandra.8

this book is perfect good luck in the contest

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paulashene

Enjoyed this story very much ~ loved your analogies ~ Paula

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etelizabeth

Oh, Rebekah...this sounds like a true event. If not, you've done a grand job of framing it. I thought you did a clever thread in letting your type/color of glasses mimic the feel of the moment. And you hit on a profound logic: perpetrators are always dangerous and manipulative. It only takes time for the control to reach its full-blown strength...and often, it's too late for the partner. But, as your ending shows, the second... Show more

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mshorror

I enjoyed your book. Nice job!

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