to find such an original and trippy story and someone stringing the words together with such a command for the English language is sick! I pity the poor fool who plays scrabble against you rebeckdawn.
WOW. Fantastic Story.
Lions.
A magical/ miracle pencil with a name...I'm hooked :D
Love it.
Very fun to read. I was disapointed when i got to the last page and saw there was no more.
I'm glad to have read this delightful story, perhaps I was fated to read it.
Like Felix, I think it reaches more than just children, but your targeted audience well surely love this. Your words painted a picture so vivid that I found myself looking at my Howard with a questioning eye...LOL!
Wonderful story, you are indeed a excellent writer, one I will be keeping my eye on as well as this story.
This isn't really a children's story...although it fits well into that genre...it is a deeply philosophical work!
How delightful that Chris "happened" upon (or over) Howard--how fortunate for the young boy indeed! Was the meeting fated? I for one want to believe it was:) And Susie...the short scene was inspiring. But, it all ended too soon, as so many wonderful things do.
I have a feeling we'll meet up with this trio again,... Show more