I really appreciate the feedback everyone! I'm going to be posting something else that I've been working on soon and I would love to get your critiques on that as well!

Creative and ingeniously funny. An enjoyable read.

I really love this story. I learned I'm never going on a blind date.You are a very good writer.

cc

Wow...I found this short story to be quite interesting. The male character was quite eccentric and so was the girl that got hooked LOL

Great Writing!!! Like the Twilight Zone!!

elizabethsfirst

Review - Reminded me very much of Alice in Wonderland, in a much more adult and whimsical way. Your visuals were outstanding, the cadence quaint. I hope that you put up more of your poetry. I find it quite thought provoking.

Absolutely love the cover. Excellent job! Robynn

I like your style. The irony and the different path you chose for the poem is unique. Cant wait to read more.

Rebecca,

Wow. This is a great change from the usual poetry. I love it. It is quirky with twists here and there. Makes you wonder about going on blind dates, but it hilarious at the same time.

I look forward to reading more of your work.

Now I'm hooked.
'Write more' is the cliche of the day.

And "Nine Stories" (which has For Esme - with Love and Squalor in it) is on my list of favourites.

Although I don't think my writing would ever be anything like Salinger's, I thank you for the compliment! :)

That was wonderfully weird, and well delivered.