Woaah... I don't think I can fault this!! I'm almost halfway through, and am pretty darn hooked!! You write like a published author it's amazing. Can't wait to finish this =)

Preston, I finished Unbelievable this morning. Without a doubt, one of THE best long-short stories I've ever read. Your superb narrative made me laugh my rear off. This is a story that belongs in The Best American...er...Canadian Short Stories, 2013. It's fabulous!

Preston, it has taken me awhile to read, but now that I have, I just have to finish. I really love your style, descriptions, and depth of character. I was hooked from the first page and I only stopped by to download and read later. Wonderful writing from a wonderful writer!!

I really loved the story! The whole parallel narrative line idea was just great. I also loved the complexity of the characters and how detailed their backgrounds were. It was impressive the see the amount of research you did for this story. I even loved the small whimsical detailes in the story, like how the food was stored alphabetically in the fridge.
All in all, it was a great story and very pleasantly and professionally presented.

I love this story Preston. All the twist and turns, the way the story finally came together, it was wonderful! Masterfully done!