I like this. It is new and fresh. You are doing well in keeping the story moving. You have given some good images, and you can describe scenes well. Keep on writing! Robynn

I love the paranormal world and haven't read many about witches and I'm glad I did!!! I didn't even realize I was already on page 21 until I got to page 22 and saw it end! Can't wait to read more and please if you wouldn't mind repaying the favor please read my book Awakening Summer and vote for it if you like it, because it is entered in the Get Published Contest. I would greatly appreciate it.

Has the makings of being a really good story, keep at it, I want to know more bout Effie...:)

your friend,
zunaloy