that was actually really good, you could probably go far in writing. You should think about actually trying to make a longer version and possibly try to publish it, i know I would buy it.

i cried, this was so deep and real and sad, and i really liked the twist at the end, great job peyton :)

Thanks Anya that means a lot to hear from a good friend :) and yes I was hoping you would catch that!!!!! lol and I love your work as well!!!!

WTF?!?!?! That was so unexpected, but very good, emotional, realistic!!!! The list goes on and on! Great job Peyton!!!!
O, n don't think I didn't catch my name in there! lol!
The story was great, I can't wait to read more of your work!!!!!
Love always, Anya (a.k.a. Chloe)

There will be more to the book. This is just some of what I wrote. And thanks! :)

Write more I love it

lol yea I kinda noticed that when I started reading it the second time. I didnt fully take that in. But thanks that means alot :) I still have to read yours

I really liked it and think that your book has lots of potential. You're a very good and descriptive writer. I could imagine everything clearly...the one crititcism I have is that it's really, really fast paced. One second there meeting and the very next day he's saying the l-word. I don't know if you did that purposely because of how much our generation throws that words around or if it was intentional...still! It's great! Keep writing and message me when you update!
Your friend, Chloe!