Clever writing, with a lot of heart. I suspected the end as I have read just lately, Racing in the Rain, a story of a family told from dogs point of view. I read it earlier, and it is a great fit for The Romeo and Juliet contest.
I don't do tragic well- that is without a bucket of tears...thanks for the thumbs up..p
your review. That you were wrong in the character's identities was tongue in cheek left me with a smile especially since you found it to be a charming story.
I would rather the next one be a happy not tragic ending but one does not know what path the contest subject takes until unveiled - sort of like this story....xo...P;]
I knew a very short distance in, Paula, that this was a story of two dogs :) Just knew it.
The wonderful thing about this short tale is how splendidly you painted the pictures of your two main characters. With only a few simple changes they may well have been to humans engaged in the story instead of two...
I am charmed by the plot, your ability to make it come alive, and, again, by your characters.
for the vote of confidence I so needed from a male prospective...p
A love story told very well . You kept me guessing right until the end. Great job Paula.
I had it resolve that way for closure and felt the same but their lives in the flesh ended somewhat differently...p
- I try to only read Disney to my grandkids and not write it...p
