read and comment...I had debated whether or not to add the last paragraph - but it was fitting

Such a sad but, lovely story. You kept the mystery to the end, well done. Serena

Glad for your reading and comments I value...p

but this story did not...P

I'm glad you like it and left a comment...p

for taking the time to read and to enjoy. And for you wonderful comment.

it was more than difficult to write this ending which actually had closure. The real tale this is based on did not. I was crying as I wrote ~ I don't do sad well...p

with a surprise ending. Great little story with a lot of emotion that bubbles to the surface as I read it. Great job. Paula

Lovely short sad tale, with a happy ending (I hope).

A beautiful but sad story. Well done Paula.