I didn't have the heart to do it. Yours is a sad story, and well written. It held my interest all the way to the end. I had different theories about who they were until you clearly told us at the end. Very nice.

This was the hardest to write - thank you for comments...p

Ah! Paula, what a beautiful well written story this is. Good luck in the contest.

Carol x

Ebony {not her name was a regal female} and this story was sad for me to write..if that came through I succeeded..p;]

Well written sad story with a surprise ending. I loved it. You have my vote in advance. :)

comment - I've never written a sad ending before and I was red eyed....p

That was so sad. And a surprise ending. Nice one Paula and Steven.
Good luck in the contest.
Love Wendy