bettyc
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bettyc

I enjoyed reading this story of everyday courage and patience.

ushapanickar
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ushapanickar

An adorable story.It is surprising
that love exists in such circumstances

r.mohankumar
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r.mohankumar

A pleasant view of life from a layman standpoint. Good effort. Keep it up!

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parvathy
parvathy

Thanks.

librarian
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librarian

Thank you for participating in our short
story writing contest "Family Stories".

The Librarian

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parvathy
parvathy

Thanks a lot. I am happy to be here.

dholm1
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dholm1

I enjoyed this. Took me in a totally different direction than I thought it was going to. But I think you have a lot of room here to lengthen this out. I know I would have liked to read more. She sounds like a facinating character.

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parvathy
parvathy

Thanks a lot for your comment. I was rather inspired by the lady myself. I personally like short stories to be really short :) Might be the hang over of being an editor myself.

dlameone
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dlameone

Nice Reading, I really got into the scene. Be careful of English tangles though. I like

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parvathy
parvathy

Thanks a lot for your comment. Could you give an example of 'English tangle', though? So that I could be careful about it in the future.