The story starts off well and the end was a real surprise
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The story starts off well and the end was a real surprise
One has to be careful about their choice of their true love. Very good "gotcha" ending to this.
Your writing is strong, yet your dialogue is stronger! I loved it!
Amazing twist. I was left with awe at the ending. I agree with everyone else, great dialogue you had me going until the very end. Loved it!
knew the temptress was more than a face value lure but never expected what it turned out to be..
Impressive writing, Paper. Beautiful flow and dialogue exchanges. You had me going right up until the end...and I u-tubed Sixx AM:)
Very cool!
