quite interesting the only thing wrong with it is you're using 'as we' abit too much. you're a good writer.

If you did have the chance to help a man like that -because you trusted your intuition, then it was really a gift on that day.
I had taken my daughters for a Tom Boy on a sad and painful Sunday in Mexico City, after a major family violence episode and we were restoring our pledge and feelings of love when I saw a chubby old man sitting accross the restaurant who was staring out the window, then lowered his head and past from our world. I decided to take over and walk on our own (violence was not legally penalized in Mexico at that time). But I still consider that message of a peaceful death inspired me to take over and walk with a look on the future for the girls. They did well!

This is a wonderful short story. It was among the first few books I read on here, and it was truly amazing. This would be a great story to be read on Christmas Eve and/or Christmas.

This is a wonderful short story. It was among the first few books I read on here, and it was truly amazing. This would be a great story to be read on Christmas Eve and/or Christmas.

This is the very first book I read here. I just found Bookrix today, and I am off to a perfect start. I loved reading I Remember by Old Salt. Hope there are more books by Old Salt..

This book was well written and a very good/sad story.GOOD LUCK in your writing career.

Keep up the good work and good luck on your next one.

All I can say is...... Wow.

Its good to be reminded that when we give of ourselves to others, then our own probls seem to melt away and that person we have helped becomes our strength. This was a good book. Very inspirational!

that was really good sucha lovely warm story although it could of been abit more interesting it was a nice easy read thanks