in very good detail

That is truly a heart warming story. Well done.

Story makes my heart feel like new

You wrote a lovely heart warming story. Hope to read more of your work. Serena

Wonderful Heart Felt story

I LOVE YOUR STORY.THE PART THAT I LIKE IS THE ENDING. ALSO I ENJOYED THE BOOK!

i love them

You are an amazing story wrighter, I must admit when I am writing stories that they are never as long as you think that they are whilst writing keep it up. I love short stories xxx

that was a good story. I was very touched by this story.

this was a wonderful story it touched me on a day when it seemed things were bad but they were not.