Awesome
ur grammer needs help same with your spelling but likethe concept and moral of the storey
for the fed back and i will try to correct my grammer on this but its hard to when it make prefect since to me lol but i will read over it again and i will update it maybe tonight are tomorrow and i will read you book now thank for fav it.
I love the books so far, But you should check your grammer ( I suck at it too lolz) and Practice more :) But so far its GREAT, you have a great plot, good characters, and HOT guys :) SO keep it up :)
-Jay ( Btw Read My book 'to kiss a wolf'